The time has come

Just clarifying that a chargeback ban isn't a rank scam.

 

Just as bad.

 

I wasn't the one who did the chargeback though... I was victim :/

 

Ah okay then.

 

-1, you advertised app and can be immature, but I see you have room for improvement !

 

+/-

 

-1
I'm not sure how I feel about this honestly
But, you are very impatient. I recall a few weeks ago you were trying to argue with me because you wouldn't get something back (I believe it was a refund) and you wouldn't really drop the subject after I told you that an S-mod/admin would take care of it.

 

I understand that full well, but on three incidences, you received large sums of money directly from incidences of rank scamming. You were also involved in some conspiracy that warranted a perm of you as well as a few other people. The chargeback issue I have not mentioned because that does not reflect any change in capability.

 

I included that I was Supreme in my Helper application. Not to brag or give myself a better chance or something, purely because just saying 'Citizen' felt incorrect.

Anyways, onto the application. I'd like start doing more in-depth replies on applications again, so here goes

Forums ||

Opinion ||
Being a forums stalker, I immediately appreciate anyone who is on the forums frequently. However, when going through your history, there's a few things that worried me.

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This is pretty rude, I have to say. Why couldn't you just say, 'Oh, welcome back, but are you sure someone hacked your account?' The 'get a life' was unnecessarily angry, which worries me when it comes to a /modreq that requires patience.

Not to mention your recent warning points, almost enough to warrant a forum ban, in which every post you were rude and posting in places you didn't need to. I don't like how on the forums you spend most of your time laughing at others, generally showing immaturity, never taking anything seriously, and sometimes just being downright rude. I very rarely see you post anything especially friendly or helpful.

Suggestions ||
Clean up your act on the forums. I do not want to see a potential Helper posting things like 'GTFO' and 'get a life' consistently. I also suggest watching the Staff Recruitment, Report a Bug, Suggestions, and Q&A sections, while posting helpful, literate, and friendly posts on new threads in these sections. Try to avoid being rude or attacking people on their opinions and posts. Just be respectful in general.

Vote ||
-1
For general rudeness, inconsistent friendliness, and overall bad behaviour.
Worth 30% of total.

In Game ||

Opinion ||
I see you in game often, which is good, and I think that you are pretty helpful. But you also tend to get caught up in arguments often and I've seen you be rude when you don't catch yourself. This can be an issue; if there's a day when you are tired or stressed, you may easily snap which is a bad quality.

Not to mention your incredible(ly long) banhistory and the tendency for you to be accused of having a lot of alts/your brothers and sisters causing you to be banned. This all together makes me doubt the credibility of you and your account, as well as making me cautious do to your countless excuses for unbans.

Suggestions ||
You are getting a lot better at being friendly and active in game, but you haven't proved to me that you and your account are very secure. Please find a way to show us that these incidents will not happen again in a few weeks.

Vote ||
+/-
For conflicting friendliness vs. insecure account.
Worth 30% of total.

TeamSpeak ||

Opinion ||
Short and sweet; I see you often on TeamSpeak but I don't talk to you too much, from what I've seen, you are in general very friendly and talkative. I often see you in the larger channels, communicating with many people.

Suggestions ||
None.

Vote ||
+1
For general friendliness and the amount you communicate and interact with others.
Worth 10% of total.

Application ||

Legend ||
Good
Neutral
Unnecessary
Bad
Spelling/Grammar Corrections
Spelling/Grammar Removals
Comments

Warning: I'm going to be nit picky.

Information ||
[quote]In Game Name: n00bslayer_99
Skype (Yes/No): Yes. Username on request.
Teamspeak Username: n00bslayer_99
Mic use: Always.
Age: 15.
Timezone: GMT+10 (brisbane, AU)
Hours online per weekday: [school; 4-6][Holiday; 6-8]
Hours online per weekend: 6-10 (varies on plans)
Position Changes: (ex. Citizen to Helper, Helper to Mod)
Citizen (Premium) to Helper.[/quote]
I have very few issues with anything in this beginning part, other than spelling/grammar and you leaving a bit to much of the format in, which is purely a pet peeve. You have good activity, frequent mic use, and an unusual timezone.

Introduction ||

This is alright, I have to say. However, I found it rather short, uninteresting, and it left me wishing you had added in a bit more. The 'link for full story' was unnecessary and made me feel like you were aiming for sympathy points. This was further bolstered by the fact that you barely explained, just linked people to a thread completely unrelated to your helper application. You should never link something in an application, it's unprofessional and looks silly. Not to mention the second thing you had in your introduction that bothered me, while not completely bad, felt like stating the obvious; you obviously want Helper. I wish you'd added a bit more about your personality for those who don't know you, and had tried to refrain from stating the obvious. There were also a large amount of minor spelling and grammar mistakes that bothered me (I did say I was going to be nit picky).

Why ||

Your first paragraph in this section was almost completely unnecessary. Yes, I realize that you are trying to make a point that you dislike how people don't welcome everyone, but you don't need to tell a story to do it. It strikes me as unprofessional, and that's not something you want your application to be. You also use capitals, which always feel immature to me. Utilizing the bold function would be better, or nothing at all. It seemed a little awkward to me that you used the word 'infamous' completely incorrectly, as well, because it makes me feel like you were trying to use big words to seem more professional.

Now, onto your subsections here. The TeamSpeak was alright, though I don't understand why you used italics and didn't use bold earlier, but to each their own. The 'I treat it like Facebook' was extremely unnecessary and weird for me, because the forums are very dissimilar to Facebook, and when you say that, not everyone knows how you treat Facebook. And I do see your suggestions, but you don't tend to post much on other people's suggestions, or at least not literate, constructive posts (see Forums section above).

I understand that in essays, quotes are meant to be used. But the quote you used is not only barely related to the subject at hand, but also just generally out of place. You didn't really explain why you used it. I also dislike how you said you 'understand what you are signing up for here', it makes you seem sort of cocky (no offence) in the way that you are acting like you know what it's like to be Helper. Tiny pet peeves aside, you also said that your 'priorities would be instantly changed' if you got Helper, along with your 'priorities would be to help the community rather than playing the game'. If you are a candidate for Helper, these should already be your priorities. You shouldn't change only after you get accepted. That's silly.

Other than the unnecessary and frankly desperate start, this paragraph was pretty good. I only wish you'd expanded upon how you being in the Navy Cadets would affect your work as Helper.

Again with storytelling? Alright, this time it wasn't that bad. It only felt a little like you were bragging, and also a little unnecessarily long. It would have been better if you'd decided to throw in a bit of explanation on how these things affected your work ethic, rather than just listing them.

Okay, maybe I'm being a bit mean here, but considering this is all basically bad stuff, would have been better to put in Weaknesses. Or, if not, you could have mentioned whether or not you learned quickly, purely because you said you'd like to gain experience quickly. (Just a tip, you don't have to follow the guidelines exactly; in fact, it's better to think outside the box rather than inside it)

Strengths ||

Considering I just faulted you on this, I'd like to say that I really like the idea of this section. It's nice that you added this, although it did sort of underline the fact that originally you followed the set guidelines.

I did like the idea of your values section, but I would prefer if you said why you listed those, such as you always worked hard to protect your values, or you always worked to achieve them. Right now it's just a list.

I put your timezone as neutral because while I agree it's good, I very much dislike that you put it on your application here. It's not a strength, you happen to have a timezone where you end up at a time where there's less staff members. I really disagree with ever hiring someone just because of timezone, so putting that here had no point.

Your maturity section is confusing, if exaggerating a little. I often see you more immature than mature, which worries me. Furthermore, the fact that you have to try to be mature seems a little iffy.

I like this section the most, initiative. But the first sentence was unnecessary and the third scares me a little. You said that you put down everything to finish it, but oftentimes, you can't. You have to instead work efficiently to get to both in time. Putting everything you are doing down to do it, is not only illogical, but just in general leads to issues. And we don't expect you to immediately drop everything to do a modreq.

With your grudges, it's perfect. You could have explained a little why/what grudges you hold, but otherwise, I like how you said you were overcoming it. Though it's better not to mention names in your application.

I like this paragraph as well, although the end confuses me a little.

Finally, this one. I dislike how you consider it your biggest weakness, and I wish you'd elaborated a bit more on how you are overcoming this, but otherwise, it's good. also yay you used bold :3

This was alright, other than you overusing the word 'experience' and your confidence (not always a bad thing).

Suggestions ||
The application could be better, as it was a fair amount of filler and had a lot of spelling mistakes. I suggest getting someone to proof-read for you next time, purely due to the amount I corrected. You want your application as formal and professional as possible.

A lot of your application was good, though. Just try to think outside the box and avoid stating the obvious or unrelated things.

Vote ||
+0.25
For alright application, but a lot of unnecessary bits, filler, and spelling/grammar mistakes.
Worth 30% of total.


Final Thought ||


-0.3 + 0 + 0.1 + 0.075 = -0.125

Total: -0.125

So, I'm a little undecided on this. I wouldn't be upset or anything if I got interview, but if you get denied, I hope what I said will help you with your application in the future

tl;dr ||

I don't think it's best if you become Helper right now, but I wouldn't complain if you did.

 

How do I even respond after this? Anyways I have had a bit of trouble in the past with you, but it was somewhat my fault of you not paying back your loan. To put that aside I think you are a decent person and could be staff. I am a bit worried by your rudeness and work ethic, when will the mall be done!! Anyways I think you could be great staff so +.75 gl

 

C-c-c-combo breaker. -1

I have only had negative experiences with you. You've been very rude online, you have so many offenses in your past, and it seems like you just haven't changed. Your scamming cause over a months worth of work for the staff team, and you tried to make it harder. Your offenses were outrageous and deceiving, and I still have seen you deceive players. Just the other day you showed how rude you were. You were at your casino, hosting, when someone tried to bet lower then your minimum. You got ticked off and flipped on them. You aren't mature enough for this position, and I don't know if you will ever be. You advertising your app (and yes people, that's advertising it) is just the icing on the cake for my -1.

 

-1 you were a major scammer. And you recently got unbanned. I wouldn't trust you at all.

 

1- I didn't like when you /pay server or every1 online and you kept doing it after every told you to stop. I still remember it.

 

-1 Your ban history is a bit too long and close together for me to trust you right now.

 

I have very few issues with anything in this beginning part, other than spelling/grammar and you leaving a bit to much of the format in, which is purely a pet peeve. You have good activity, frequent mic use, and an unusual timezone.

Introduction ||

This is alright, I have to say. However, I found it rather short, uninteresting, and it left me wishing you had added in a bit more. The 'link for full story' was unnecessary and made me feel like you were aiming for sympathy points. This was further bolstered by the fact that you barely explained, just linked people to a thread completely unrelated to your helper application. You should never link something in an application, it's unprofessional and looks silly. Not to mention the second thing you had in your introduction that bothered me, while not completely bad, felt like stating the obvious; you obviously want Helper. I wish you'd added a bit more about your personality for those who don't know you, and had tried to refrain from stating the obvious. There were also a large amount of minor spelling and grammar mistakes that bothered me (I did say I was going to be nit picky).

Why ||
Your first paragraph in this section was almost completely unnecessary. Yes, I realize that you are trying to make a point that you dislike how people don't welcome everyone, but you don't need to tell a story to do it. It strikes me as unprofessional, and that's not something you want your application to be. You also use capitals, which always feel immature to me. Utilizing the bold function would be better, or nothing at all. It seemed a little awkward to me that you used the word 'infamous' completely incorrectly, as well, because it makes me feel like you were trying to use big words to seem more professional.

Now, onto your subsections here. The TeamSpeak was alright, though I don't understand why you used italics and didn't use bold earlier, but to each their own. The 'I treat it like Facebook' was extremely unnecessary and weird for me, because the forums are very dissimilar to Facebook, and when you say that, not everyone knows how you treat Facebook. And I do see your suggestions, but you don't tend to post much on other people's suggestions, or at least not literate, constructive posts (see Forums section above).

I understand that in essays, quotes are meant to be used. But the quote you used is not only barely related to the subject at hand, but also just generally out of place. You didn't really explain why you used it. I also dislike how you said you 'understand what you are signing up for here', it makes you seem sort of cocky (no offence) in the way that you are acting like you know what it's like to be Helper. Tiny pet peeves aside, you also said that your 'priorities would be instantly changed' if you got Helper, along with your 'priorities would be to help the community rather than playing the game'. If you are a candidate for Helper, these should already be your priorities. You shouldn't change only after you get accepted. That's silly.

Other than the unnecessary and frankly desperate start, this paragraph was pretty good. I only wish you'd expanded upon how you being in the Navy Cadets would affect your work as Helper.

Again with storytelling? Alright, this time it wasn't that bad. It only felt a little like you were bragging, and also a little unnecessarily long. It would have been better if you'd decided to throw in a bit of explanation on how these things affected your work ethic, rather than just listing them.

Okay, maybe I'm being a bit mean here, but considering this is all basically bad stuff, would have been better to put in Weaknesses. Or, if not, you could have mentioned whether or not you learned quickly, purely because you said you'd like to gain experience quickly. (Just a tip, you don't have to follow the guidelines exactly; in fact, it's better to think outside the box rather than inside it)

Strengths ||
Considering I just faulted you on this, I'd like to say that I really like the idea of this section. It's nice that you added this, although it did sort of underline the fact that originally you followed the set guidelines.

I did like the idea of your values section, but I would prefer if you said why you listed those, such as you always worked hard to protect your values, or you always worked to achieve them. Right now it's just a list.

I put your timezone as neutral because while I agree it's good, I very much dislike that you put it on your application here. It's not a strength, you happen to have a timezone where you end up at a time where there's less staff members. I really disagree with ever hiring someone just because of timezone, so putting that here had no point.

Your maturity section is confusing, if exaggerating a little. I often see you more immature than mature, which worries me. Furthermore, the fact that you have to try to be mature seems a little iffy.

I like this section the most, initiative. But the first sentence was unnecessary and the third scares me a little. You said that you put down everything to finish it, but oftentimes, you can't. You have to instead work efficiently to get to both in time. Putting everything you are doing down to do it, is not only illogical, but just in general leads to issues. And we don't expect you to immediately drop everything to do a modreq.

With your grudges, it's perfect. You could have explained a little why/what grudges you hold, but otherwise, I like how you said you were overcoming it. Though it's better not to mention names in your application.

I like this paragraph as well, although the end confuses me a little.

Finally, this one. I dislike how you consider it your biggest weakness, and I wish you'd elaborated a bit more on how you are overcoming this, but otherwise, it's good. also yay you used bold :3

This was alright, other than you overusing the word 'experience' and your confidence (not always a bad thing).

Suggestions ||
The application could be better, as it was a fair amount of filler and had a lot of spelling mistakes. I suggest getting someone to proof-read for you next time, purely due to the amount I corrected. You want your application as formal and professional as possible.

A lot of your application was good, though. Just try to think outside the box and avoid stating the obvious or unrelated things.

Vote ||
+0.25
For alright application, but a lot of unnecessary bits, filler, and spelling/grammar mistakes.
Worth 30% of total.

Final Thought ||

-0.3 + 0 + 0.1 + 0.075 = -0.125

Total: -0.125

So, I'm a little undecided on this. I wouldn't be upset or anything if I got interview, but if you get denied, I hope what I said will help you with your application in the future

tl;dr ||

I don't think it's best if you become Helper right now, but I wouldn't complain if you did.[/quote]
Huge thankyou chaos. Once again, you have helped me out with some very valuable info.bshould this be denied, I will be sure to improve everything you mention.
FYI my account is secure, although at the time it may not have been. 100%, it sure is now that. I got reflate red to a different family.

To clarify a few things;
The reason I was unbanned in the first place was because I was innocent. It was my ex brother who at the time rank scammed and paid me the money. Never in my life have I intended to cause problems for the staff.
Also, I think I know what you mean by I got ticked of at a person trying to bet lower then the minimum. I suspect you are talking about ausomery, and I'm not sure if he told you this, or you just assumed it. The true reason I got ticked off at him was because he chicken bombed my casino and my town.
Could you please explain further on what you mean by 'very rude online'?
You say I will never be mature enough for this position, and honestly, that's a bit too harsh.

 

he advertised the app why has this not been denied yet?

 

It is time!

 

You are a great guy. I see you alot in game. But not in ts. Also you only chat alot. Not helpin others. You should help more in shout and ts. -.5 good luck noob

 

-1 need to see more activity and u dont even help.

 

-1 I don't have proof but you just scammed me 1.2mil.



Even if that didn't happen, i would still -1 you. you're always rude to me and others.