Helper Application from bloxoh

Member Name bloxoh

Additional In Game Names: Shiny_Torchic

How old are you? 14

Location: USA

Do you have TeamSpeak? Yes

How many hours per day do you play MeepCraft? (weekdays) 2-3 hours

How many hours per day do you play MeepCraft? (weekends) 3-4 hours

Have you ever been staff on this or any other server? Yes

References: Please give IGN's Jimbofee01
Dragon_kookie
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When did you join Meepcraft? 2 and a half years ago

Introduction: Hello, I am Eva. I am a female. I am currently 14 years old and I live in NJ, USA. My strengths are talking politely to others. I am an Elite donator.

Why should you be Helper? I am going for helper because I want to help the server grow and expand as they have done for me.

What are your weaknesses? I would like to expand my knowledge of the meepcraft community.

Please give any other information you might think is useful for us to know: I am highly knowledgeable in the game play.
I look forward to be a member of this team.

 

Have you ever been staff on this or any other server? Yes

Care to elaborate?

References: Please give IGN's Jimbofee01
Dragon_kookie
_masterdude_

When did you join Meepcraft? 2 and a half years ago

Introduction: Hello, I am Eva. I am a female. I am currently 14 years old and I live in NJ, USA. My strengths are talking politely to others. I am an Elite donator.

Seriously? Your strengths are being polite? In this section you should really talk about your hobbies what you do day to day.

Why should you be Helper? I am going for helper because I want to help the server grow and expand as they have done for me.

I would suggest proof reading your work before hand. You want to be helper so you can help? We already know that, what else?

What are your weaknesses? I would like to expand my knowledge of the meepcraft community.

So? What exactly is your weakness?

Please give any other information you might think is useful for us to know: I am highly knowledgeable in the game play.
I look forward to be a member of this team.

Look I'm really sorry and you seem like a nice girl but your app is lacking and I feel like you haven't put much effort into this app. It's a -1 from me

 

That's it? One simple, short sentence?
-1

 

Hello there
You seem like a nice person but I dont think I could see you as a helper in the near future. Your app was short and your forums activity is not good as well (cant judge in game activity, we have different timezones). Overall, work on your activity in all aspects of the server; also, I suggest looking at some Accepted applications to understand what a good app should look like.
Even though I am a -1 for now, I best of luck!

 

Comments are on purple, things which are bad/wrong are on red.

Overall this app was really short and not detailed. You should look at the accepted applications to see what length application is good. Also, I never see you online, you should raise the hours you're on and be helpful in global chat. Your forums activity is really low, feels like you created your account then left it, and you started using it recently only to apply.
I am on -1 due these reasons.

 

Hey bloxoh, I have seen you before in-game but I don't see you helping at all though. Your app is overall about one paragraph and does not include a lot of details.
-1 for now

 

-1 for these reasons

-have never seen you before in game
-terribly weak app
-never seen you besides this post on forums

 

-1 from me, for reasons stated above, but just keep working at it and maybe next time it'll be a +1!

 

Hey,
So it's going to be a -1 from me at the moment.
Your application as a whole was about under ten sentences. Detail is needed when you apply, because we want to know about you! The application is there for you to introduce yourself, and highlight your strengths. As well, weaknesses are things that may impair you from being a Helper. Not pet peeves, or what you want to learn.
Also, if you wish to expand your knowledge of the MeepCraft community, what's holding you back from doing it now? You don't need staff commands to learn about the server. Check out all three aspects of the server and talk with some people! Take some time to study the different servers and find out different commands and cool things to do. There are lots of ways to play on here.
Take the advice others have given as well. Nonetheless I wish you good luck!

 

-1

Thats a weakness?

To short there should be more effort

Anything else?

These should be hobbies

Like?

Thats all?

I've never seen you online or on fourms.
Highly weak app
Sorry but you need to put more effort in this -1

 

This application had no sense towards me as a read it. This was one of the shortest applications I have read, and this surprised me because an average 14-year-old could write a better application.

Either this is a lie or you visited the server for some time, then quit. I never saw your nametag because I was here in 2012 (I have a name-change at the moment).

You constantly used "I am' for all but one sentence in your introduction. You never gave us any info about you. The only actual info you gave was that you're female, name is Eva, 14 years old, and you live in New Jersey. If you joined 2 1/2 years ago and actually stayed, you would've known how to write a better introduction than this.

This made no sense at all. I was confused on what you were saying because what you were saying (in my words) was:
"I'm going for helper because they helped me grow and expand, so I'll give back to them."
You didn't explain the 'grow and expand' part. Instead of typing one sentence explaining why you should be helper, actually get some friends to help you type it or come up with how this section should be typed. The 'Why?' section is the most important section of the whole application, so proof-read this part mainly next time.

This isn't a weakness at all. This is what you would want in Meepcraft. You didn't fully explain or give any weaknesses to your knowledge, so the Staff Team won't know what issues you may have as a Staff member here.

Overall, this application was very, very weak and poorly made. Please work on any issues I stated in my post.
-1

 

We as a team have decided to deny this application. We think you need to work on putting more effort into your application and improve your ingame activity.