Helper Application from JayMasterPro

Member Name JayMasterPro

Additional In Game Names: jaymasterpro XxJwillz

How old are you? 13

Location: Canada,Ontario,Toronto

Do you have Discord? Yes

How many hours per day do you play MeepCraft? (weekdays) 1-3

How many hours per day do you play MeepCraft? (weekends) 2-6

Have you ever been staff on this or any other server? No

References: Please give IGN's jaymasterpro

When did you join Meepcraft? 24th May 2017

Introduction: Hi Im Jayman, You Can Call me jay and i love to help people if you have any questions just tell me! theres a 90% chance of me helping u out!

Why should you be Helper? Because i love to help people and things!

What are your weaknesses? Bees Lions Bears Onions

Please give any other information you might think is useful for us to know: I Like To Help.

 

For starters, is this an application, or is it some type of prank on being staff? If it's not, that's shocking, and here's why:
1. I think it's far too early to go from player to staff member.
2. References are meant to be other players who can tell a little bit about you.
3. Far too informal and short.
4. By weakness, they mean actual weakness, not weird things like that.
5. You really need to talk more about yourself, not something brief.
A lot of things to improve on, so I am strongly voting down -5 Good luck. I hope you improve on yourself for next time.

 

-1.
The application was extremely weak. To get an idea of what a strong application looks like here: Deljikho's Helper Application
Helper Application from kcschmidt
These are just a small few out of many.
I feel as if at this time you haven't gotten to know what a helper does or the expectations that come along with it. This isn't a bad thing, but your just on the launching pad for now. I suggest to go through the applications I said above and to also wander through the accepted section. Also, observe staff members in game to see what type of duties they preform publicly. If you have any questions for a staff member, I'm sure they'd be glad to assist you and give you more information.

In addition to that, I wanted to quickly say those aren't real weaknesses. A weakness wouldn't be I'm not a good pvper or I can't handle spicy foods. A weakness would be something that can prevent you from doing your job or might make you struggle. Some weaknesses are:

• Impatient
• Tempered
• Busy
• Immature
• Emotional
• Controllsive
• Anti Social

These are just a couple.

 

i did /modreq and a mod came and said what to be done and i did that all what he said, and i dont want to be discribed Big, im not a person to be in the crouds im not a cool kid ands thats good, don't worry about that and ill make another applactaion when im really ready with a better description.

 

Hey Jay.
I'm just a flat out -1. You made a modreq about what to do next after you made your forums account and got the permissions to finally access the application form. I mailed you, since you weren't online, on what to do next, specifically stating to actually give it time and be helpful before you apply. But you applied. This, to me, looks like a sad way to actually try to get helper. Look at other staff applications, both accepted and denied to actually understand what to write rather than just stating "Bee, lions, bear" are your weakness. Also, you should not put yourself as a reference. References are people who agree to vouch for you for the things you say. And if you apply in the future, which you most likely will. DO NOT use random people and put them as your reference, cause you need their permission to do so.
You just joined literally a week ago. Actually take the time and effort to make yourself look as if you'd be an excellent candidate to become a staff member.
-1

 

-1
Why does your app say you are 13, when your profile says 10? I don't care how young an applicant is as long as they are mature, but lying about your age only makes you look worse.

 

Another Toronotonian! Why are there so many on Meep? Sorry. -1. Short app, no effort put in, never seen you before. Also you listed yourself as a reference.

 

Heya Jay, for me it is going to be a -1 and here are the reasons why and what i think could help:

Okay so this is a weak introduction, a introduction for me is where you tell people who may not have seen you in game before who you are, why you love meep craft, how you found meep, what you do in your spare time etc. We want to be able to get to know you as a person in this section and sometimes its good to remember The more detail the better.

Okay so yes it is good to love to help, but this section here is where the most detail needs to come in, try adding some sub-headings, for example: Dedication, Experience, Location etc. Bare in mind you have all the resources provided for you, you can look at old accepted applications and old denied applications to get a feel of what to do and not to do. You need to really explain to us here why you want to be staff on the server, what drives you.

So this section should be used for weaknesses such as Maturity, Availability, etc. you should also explain here how you feel you could over come this if accepted.

Also, your references should be people on the server who you have spoke to and they are willing to give their word that you would be a good staff member.

So yeah, unfortunately this is a -1 from me but work on the things that not only i have said but the people before and after me and im sure you will do great.

Happy Helping

 

-1 mate, I love short applications but I have no idea about you. If you make another application in the future I will be more than happy to give you a hand.

 

I know I'm not supposed to comment on apps while I have one open myself, but I couldn't stop myself.

You don't list yourself as a reference. If you don't have any, that's fine.

First of all, you joined like what is it? 10 days ago? I don't see how you could help people out when you just joined. The 90% chance thing just sounds weird.

You literally put one sentence. Obviously you love to help people. You applied for helper.

These are not weaknesses that could hurt you in your time as staff.

You already stated this

 

I have same weaknesses yet this is seeming as a joke and this needs to be serious and taken seriously. If you are seriously looking for a spot on the staff team i would wait a bit and stay more active and mature in this 'wonderful' community.

 

-1
Not going to repeat what others said
The app suffers from a huge lack of detail.

 

Just to be brutally honest with you, this is one of the weakest applications I have seen. You've almost included every cheesy phrase in this to go for Helper.

Let me just list some simple, yet obvious flaws.
- Lying about your age (Profile says 10 yrs, app says 13)
- Weaknesses arent even weaknesses. Look like fears + what you don't like.
- You only joined about 15 days ago. Take a few months to get used to the server, then reapply.
- Intro is supposed to tell us to bit about yourself. Not a description of what a normal player would put in global to be a "helping person".
- Why section literally tells us NOTHING. You need to explain, in as much detail as possible, why you should have this position as staff.

To go into more depth, I'm just gonna start off with the Age issue here. Just be honest about it. I can already tell your true age just from the way you type. I too lied about my age and said I was 15 when I was only 11. Kind of "wears out" the starting trust with you.

To talk about application-length and what you should include: Check out the "Accepted" forum of the website. Look at the applications and see what they did to make their application a glowing star. Now, I'm not saying to copy their work. But try to have the sort of "format" that they have. Especially in the "Why" section.

For now, -1. You need to improve a whole ton before applying.

 

-1 you are from canada

Seriously, Jay
Read the above comments, they are pretty helpful!

 

same

 

+1 I like canada

You seem motivated, Ill excuse the weak application because I think we need some fresh players on the staff team.

(Please try harder next time)

 

this is just so bad i don't even know what to say

-1

 

this

 

Hey there, we've decided to deny you for now. We'd really like to see you more active on all three aspects of the server, as well as with a stronger application. If you have any questions, feel free to message myself or any other staff member, and we'd be happy to give you some pointers. Have fun in the meantime!