Helper Application from zsuzsu1

Member Name zsuzsu1

Additional In Game Names: zsuzsu1

How old are you? 13

Location: Canada

Do you have TeamSpeak? No but I will be joining tomorrow

How many hours per day do you play MeepCraft? (weekdays) 3

How many hours per day do you play MeepCraft? (weekends) 6

Have you ever been staff on this or any other server? No

References: Please give IGN's

When did you join Meepcraft? October 13th, 2015

Introduction: I joined a few months ago and I really love this server. I would love to be able to help it grow. I know a lot about it since I ask many questions. I'm really smart and do really well in school. I love math and am amazing at using computers.

Why should you be Helper? I am very helpful and love helping others. I have many ideas to help the server and would love to participate in the growth of this amazing community.

What are your weaknesses? I am sometimes impatient and lack the ability to communicate well. I am also rather pessimistic but in the last few months that has been starting to change.

Please give any other information you might think is useful for us to know: I am very friendly and love helping people.

 

Hey zsuzsu1!
Team speak is required if you want to become a staff member.
Your application was really bad and you could definitely have done much better. Your introduction is about you, your personality, not about what you do for the server.

There is not much to say.
-1

 

-1 Short App
-1 Only seen you once
-1 You said the same things more than once
-1 Introduction is sopossed to be about you (Hobbies,Favorite things,Stuff about you.
-1 No teamspeak
+1 I will give you this because I feel like it
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-1 Good Luck next time Hope to see you more ingame! I would like to be friends with you

 

Hey zsu, you seem like an awesome guy with good intentions!

Unfortunately, it looks like you're pretty new to the forums and you haven't quite made yourself familiar with the server. I suggest checking this out http://meepcraft.com/threads/phoenixpuppy-should-i-apply-for-helper.20577/ and coming back when you think you're ready. Good luck!

 

Alright pal! Lets start off this comment with you being "13"
So, you say your 13? I am younger than this age and know if your applying for a staff position you have to write your best. This isn't a little fourth grade essay, you are applying for Helper on the biggest economy server.
Lets start, I like you, you ask questions and aren't afraid to ask for help when most needed! I love the way you joined a few months ago and are eager to help us grow, but we have a little tweeks to work out first. For starters, teamspeak is needed for voice player interactions and the staff interview.

Code:

ts.meepcraft.com

I haven't had many first hand interactions with you, but from what I've heard, you are friendly and considerate. You stated many times you are helpful,

So that's pretty much all you put for 'why you should be helper'
The introduction is where we should be getting to know you, what you do for fun, whats your favorite school subject, stuff like that to get us interested in you. Human interactions/communications are very valuable assets for a staff member to have, you could always try to be as friendly and interactive as you possibly can (don't creep people out though)

So now, I am an overall -1, sorry buddy! Never the less, great luck! and Enjoy your night/day :3!
~Shark_Waffle~

 

Hey zsuzsu,
I have seen you a couple of times and according to me you are a nice guy. But
- TS is required for interview
- Never seen you helping in /g
- Short and Not very Informative App
-1 for now. If you do well this vote may change to +1

 

Not right now!
-1
I don't think you are ready because truly you haven't proven you are helper materiel and heres some things to work on!!

-Help people more! ive never seen u!
-TS IS A MUST!!!
-Get some friends and talk more in /g it gives you a cozy rep and lets people feel good around you
Good luck!

 

Right now is not the time to apply. You were unbanned only on January 18th, and I feel as if you still need some time to get used to the server.

First off, you shouldn't edit your application. Once it's submitted, it has to stay in its original form. Second, you should've gotten Teamspeak once you started typing your application. TS is a priority for interviews.

This is an intro that uses the idea of Talking about when you joined, who got you into Meepcraft, and so on. That idea is a very big cliche that's used often in New Player applications. Talk about yourself! Talk about your hobbies, what classes you take in school, etc. The sentence "I really love this server" and "I would love to help it grow" won't really tell us that you can actually do that. I've seen no acts-of-helping from you.

This is where the purpose of references come in. You say you're "very helpful" and you "love helping others". But you can't prove that unless you have proof. And that proof is the players on your reference list. You ask them if they can be on your list, and they can reply with "Yes" or "No".
If you have ideas that will "help" the server, write a Suggestion.

Overall, -1. I don't find you ready for Helper, since you like using the word "Love" in basically almost every sentence you type.

 

WOW! I never thought I'd live to see the day, someone actually EDITED in MY suggestions INTO THEIR application! This evolves my -1 into an even bigger -1, you should know by now this is not acceptable

all that.... EDITED in....... Please.... get more familiar with commands and rules before applying

 

Well I've seen you online time by time, but not that often(Timezones might be reason). This app was short and lacking, you should take a look at accepted applications to see good examples of great applications. And you edited it which is not allowed, unless you change "Yes" to TS, meaning that you got it. And into that, you should get TS before applying.
Overall I wont quote everything what everyone else said…
I am on -1.

 

-1
You accused me of ladder camping in terrarium when I wasn't and did. It leave me alone after many many warnings. You kept msging me after I told you to stop many times as well. You are not staff material at all.

 

-1

When reading the app it seemed nice and positive but,
*very short
*Don't tell us how YOU can directly and positively affect the server
*Don't see you alot
*Don't have any refs

 

-1

If you can't even write a proper and mature application, that points out good points, I honestly don't think you're ready for helper.
Keep on trying!

 

-1

You are very nice and eager to help. I have talked to you many times in-game, but like other people are saying, you need teamspeak. Also, writing an app is something you have to put time into. Many people spend days writing their apps. Work on your maturity and maybe some more in game knowledge. Good Luck!

 

This isn't good - you should be active for weeks, if not months, beforehand.

This is a good start, but it's really short. that's not a super bad this I'd just like to see more.

''I can help.''
If you were applying for a real job at a company, would you put this down? Noo, you wouldn't. You have to put wayyy more effort into applications. I can write a better app in 10 minutes. When I wrote my apps I took a few hours. Really try to convince me when you try to answer that question.

How are you working on these?

You already stated this. Why state it again?
Overall, app was poor and did not have a lot of effort put into it.
I see you IG, mainly when you /msg to me. You seen nice but I just don't feel that you really have the right mindset. I need to see you more. Get active on all 3 aspects on the server, apply in a month or two after really working on what I and the others above have said.

 

You edited your application, which is looked down upon, and even sometimes an auto-denial. If you are applying for staff you should know that. Also, I have not seen you be that helpful. I've seen you more asking for help. You didn't explain to us why you stand out, and why should really be staff. Anybody could be helpful and have ideas, but what's special about you? You're not a bad person, but at this time you're not staff material.

-1

 

-1
Recent banhistory.
Not the best application
Maturity (Sending forums messages to almost all staff members begging to be unbanned)
Lying when banned (I know you have tried to improve but this was not too long ago)
TS is a must
'Helping people' isnt the only thing staff do. They are role models and must be good at communicating with others.

Gl
~L

 

Hey! I am going to -1
Good things are in green
Bad things are in red
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Member Namezsuzsu1

Additional In Game Names:zsuzsu1

How old are you?13 [This is a good age]

Location:Canada [What timezone?]

Do you have TeamSpeak?No but I will be joining tomorrow [TS is required]

How many hours per day do you play MeepCraft? (weekdays)3

How many hours per day do you play MeepCraft? (weekends)6

Have you ever been staff on this or any other server?No [Past experience is good, but not vital]

References: Please give IGN's [No references?]

When did you join Meepcraft?October 13th, 2015

Introduction:I joined a few months ago and I really love this server. I would love to be able to help it grow. I know a lot about it since I ask many questions. I'm really smart and do really well in school. I love math and am amazing at using computers.
[This paragraph is way too short. I really don't know who you are]

Why should you be Helper?I am very helpful and love helping others. I have many ideas to help the server and would love to participate in the growth of this amazing community.
[Yes, as the name implies you will be helping people as a helper, but what OTHER reasons that are not obvious would you be a good helper?]

What are your weaknesses?I am sometimes impatient and lack the ability to communicate well. I am also rather pessimistic but in the last few months that has been starting to change.
[Communication is key to being a good staff member.]

Please give any other information you might think is useful for us to know:I am very friendly and love helping people.

Good luck!

 

You asked where to apply, if you didn't know this, you shouldn't apply, plus your app was weak. -1

 

Greetings, zsuzsu1! Shifty for me. You're still new, but, I feel like you have a beyond basic knowledge of MeepCraft. -1 for now, I want you to start helping in shout, and being more well-known.
Catchya later!