Architect Application from mowglisd

Member Name mowglisd

Additional In Game Names: N/A

How old are you? 16

Location: portland, oregon

Do you have Discord? Yes

How many hours per day do you play MeepCraft? (weekdays) 5-8

How many hours per day do you play MeepCraft? (weekends) 9-10

Have you ever been architect or builder on this or any other server? No

References: Please give IGN's BooBear1227

Introduction: Hello you might already know me but Im just someone who really loves The server and meeting new people .
I love music (mainly my own) and I really do love building large scale things, Oh I also absolutely LOVE making cakes and cookies Oh and i also own a town in meepcraft

Why should you be Architect? Well i really want to put in my expertise in the area of building to good use in the server also its kinda boring just making buildings that no one really sees so this will allow me to bring them into the light ALSO i have been around since 2014 i be-leave so i kinda want to give back to the server that i have loved thru the years LOVE!

What builds have you completed on the server and where might they be located? My main build and only surviving build is at my town
(to get to it just do /t spawn Music) its not anywhere near done and pretty much at 23% into the building phase... MORE LOVE!

Please give any other information you might think is useful for us to know: I do have a list of ban's but i like to look forward from that instead of sticking in the ice-ages all the time

How much experience do you have using Voxel and Worldedit? I have not actually used voxel but i do have alot of experience using worldedit also i am a fast learner when it comes to programs so i think it will be easy to use

Build Picture Uploads:

Build Picture Link:

 

I suggest you proof read your app next time, there are many... many... spelling and grammar errors.

On to the actual building!

Here is a picture of your town for reference:

I'm going to be brutally honest, this doesn't come close to the quality of building any arch would require. For a reference as to the level it does need to be at, please refer to the link Imgur: The most awesome images on the Internet
Your build lacks a significant amount of detail as it is pretty much just flat, it also looks incredibly boxy which is never a good thing, and then on top of all that it lacks a variety of different blocks other than just stone brick. I do apologize if I'm judging this based off of work that isn't your best, but when applying for a staff position, you need to have all your cards ready to play. This is the only one you've got.

Because of these reasons, I'm a -1

 

I love the pictures you added, such elegance, so white like those of the pillars located in Greek Temples.

Jokes aside, you don't have any picture uploads (as of when I'm posting this)? You need to include them, unless the real only build you're trying to include is your town build, aka, the concert hall(? I'm assuming). You still haven't learned from your previous apps. Architects are able to build almost anything is asked, and can go into so much detail into their builds. However, your build does not show the qualities an architect on this server. Build other things, such as a castle, or majestic forests. And do not try copying other builds to do so. The things you have typed still show the immaturity you have, and all in the same, it's all information that anyone can tell us why they want to be arch.
Vote at the moment is -1. I know you can improve, yet you don't take the chance to improve.

 

I don't understand why you keep applying every month or two, Please take the time to improve.
I honestly do not know why you do not try to learn from others.
Is this your third or fourth application the past year?
-1

No build pictures as of now aswell.

 

I applied 19 or 20 times dont judge based on app count

Mow, youre a cool kid, you have a generally awful attitude when things dont do your way. This includes apps, appeals, modreqs. And the build style as I see in flames post, along with inability to show other builds, it just all leaves a bad taste in thr mouth, yaknow?

-1. You need work, then the builds need work. Take time and try again later.

 

^^
you can't keep applying without improving anything, but we won't be able to see if you improve judging by one picture

you should be able to build in multiple styles, so to get better I would practice a decent amount, then reappeal in a few months.

Lastly, although your writing is still legible, it doesn't impress anyone and just makes some people think negatively of you. Though this isn't an essay for school or anything like that, you should still work on capitalization, spelling, etc.,

 

Mow, I've talked to you a bit and you seem like a really nice person so that's a plus. You didn't include any build pics and the one Flame posted was not that impressive. The build was alright, but nowhere near architect quality. Sorry, but for me, it's a -1.

 

Like i said above IT's not even done.... its onlu 23% there... ALSO I feal as if you are always commenting on my grammer BTW arch's are not helpers so its not REALLY needed!

also if the pic he made is so bad then why art you looking at it at my town?

 

This is exactly what I meant when I said you had poor attitude when things aren't going your way.
Don't be like this in your applications and you will be way more successful.

 

Sorry mowglisd but for me it's going to be a -1 for the following reasons.
1. Your introduction has to be an intro about you, because you said that you love certain things, but I still feel like I don't know you in detail.
2. The language you've used is too informal for it to be an application. I feel as though you are basically having a conversation to someone. So make it more formal for it to sound that you really want to be a staff member.
3. I get why you would have one emoji at the end or so (even though it's better not to) but there is no need to make one every 2-3 sentences, it signifies informal apps.
4. It's not a good idea to use any slang or jargon words for any resumes or apps. It shows a complete lack of knowledge and laziness of spelling. I suggest using the correct spelling instead.
5. I get the struggle to post photos and link it, but if you want to get a job as an architect, I say you must do so.
6. Sadly this is the most boring and pain staking point, but you should always re-read and check for any grammar errors, mistakes or confusing sentences. If you don't think you could, ask someone else to check it for you and they can give you some feedback.

If you improve on that, you will get closer to becoming a staff member next time. I've got some good points on my application so I can then try to improve on it next time I submit it.

 

All staff members are expected to hold true a knowledge and obedience of the rules, I don't believe you can do that.

-1

 

It's a -1 from me because:

-Not very good builds
-Immature
-Spelling errors
-Short app
-Very rude

 

+1
-nice
-good singer

 

-1 to me an archs app is more on the build quality than anything else. Keep practicing, use your creativity and make it your own. Add more build pics so we can see what you are capable of.

 

i added a few things last-night should make it look nicer

 

There are still no build pictures avalible?

 

Mow,

In its simplest form: don't apply if you are not ready.

 

Ill post one in a few min ok

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sorry i could not get a full view nothing has changed up top really

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+111111111
- good builder!

 

Attitude is required in any sort of staff position. Architect is a staff position, you build server builds. And what you build isn't even close to server level.

If you decide to lash out at people for them pointing out any flaws, this application WILL NOT go well for you at all.

Overall, you are still not ready in applying. You only uploaded builds of the one building, which looks similar to a Guardian Temple tbh.

-1