Unfortunately, I must give you a -1 for these reasons:
1. You are applying for mod, but you need to be helper first.
You cannot skip to moderator! Becoming a mod is more on what you have done as a helper, with staff stuff.
2. You need to increase your forum activity.
Forum activity isn't the biggest of deals but it still shows dedication if you spend the time to make constructive comments often on the forums.
3. You need to work on your grammar.
Grammar is also not the biggest of deals, but if your grammar isn't very well, people will most likely take your application less seriously.
4. You need to give weaknesses for the position, not weaknesses that don't affect the position at all.
Weaknesses means something you may have problems with if you get staff, for example, getting a bit frustrated when people argue too much. That is an example of a weakness because that can affect the way you deal with things like modreqs. You need to truthfully say your weaknesses because if you get staff, and you didn't state your real weaknesses, you will seem as if you aren't dong as good of a job as you can be since the staff will expect you to be good at that area as well.
5. You should talk more about what you can do to help out the server and less of out of the game stuff.
Yes, you may include some in real life experiences and traits but it has to relate to the application. Saying that you love to play other games and that you play soccer isn't really related to your application. If it is, then you have to explain. You always have to explain everything in details in your application. Treat the readers as people who only know of the server but don't know what to do as staff. That way, you must explain how you can help in many different ways to the server.
6. Try to be more interactive.
Just try to be more interactive with many different players. It is always fine to play with your friends, but if you want staff, you need to get more involved with the community. Don't worry, they don't bite!
Personally, I do not think you are ready for the staff position (Helper, not mod) but over some time of hard work on all these things, you'll have a much better chance at staff!