Many grammatical errors (You didn't even spell your name right....)
Your introduction should be more about you, not anything about meepcraft. We know you play meep, what do you do besides meepcraft?
You're saying you don't have any weaknesses, wait, are your weaknesses mature and also not getting mad? I thought those were strengths (._.)
From what I get from your "Why" section is "I love meep!
You lost me here.
Your application is only 116 words long (I deleted all the parts until I got to introduction, then I deleted the bolded words) My reply is longer than your application with 141 words long.
Please spend longer than 10 mins making an application.