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Sorry, but my main issue is probably the fact that you decided to try before getting Skype and TeamSpeak, because TeamSpeak activity is required before you apply, not after, and it's a huge pet peeve of mine when people do this. You also need to work on, and I'll start with in game, then forums, and then your application.
In Game
- You need to be more active in game. Yes, I understand that your mom has a rule, but you also have to start making the most of the time you have before you apply, not after.
- I don't really see you help out; although I have seen you in Shout, shout activity is far less important than actually being a friendly and helpful person in shout.
Forums
- You only recently started on the forums. Yes, you do have some quality in your posts, but I don't like that you are still a New Member. It makes you seem like you did this on a whim.
- You may think you are being positive, but arguing does not help.
Application
Already, I have an issue. Like I mentioned above, those two things are needed before you apply, not after.
I feel like most of this paragraph is you trying to guilt us into it. I really dislike when people mention things like that, and I cannot stress enough that it doesn't help your case in the slightest. You are being overmelodramatic and completely missed the point of an introduction, which is for you to introduce yourself and put anything you think is important enough to be in your application, but not good for the Why.
Donating doesn't help you get staff, although we do appreciate it, and we like that you got your friends here because you like it so much, but this should not be in your staff application, let alone as a large portion of your Why, the most important part of your application.
Again with trying to guilt us. You also should improve before, not after, as it shows your dedication to becoming a Helper.
These are small weaknesses, if weaknesses at all. MCChat is a very bad tool for staff, as a fair amount of modreqs cause you to have to move around, and you can't do that on MCChat. Obviously you aren't very comfortable with Skype or TeamSpeak because you ignored the requirements of them and decided to just apply for the sake of applying. We are looking more for things like impatience, short temper, or immaturity.
We don't need you to lavish praise on us in your application, nor do we need you to try to guilt us again.
Sorry, but I think you are far from staff at the moment. You need to understand that staff requires a lot of dedication and you can't just decide to do it, because how do we know you won't decide to quit on a whim? I don't mean to offend either, these are just the impressions I got.
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