pizzafest helper app

Pizza,
You have complained several times that no one wants you as a Helper, but you're not fixing your problems. We're trying to help you here. You have applied several times, and gotten hundreds of critical comments. You are very immature, and you seem to lack a basic understanding of the English language. You won't stop applying and you are learning absolutely nothing from your other four applications. You are an attention seeker. If you want to be a staff member, you need to fix your many issues. Most of the players agree that you're not staff quality, but you can at least try to work on it.

I'll grade your app so I can try to show you what you need to fix. My comments are bold and italicized.

As I have said several times, WORK ON THIS.

-1 for the fifth time.

 

ok

 

When you do not know the answer to this question, you are in no shape to be staff. Pizza, you really need to take a few good months to get a knowledge of the server, mature up, improve your English, and get involved before you even think about applying again.
I really hope you consider these tips.

 

-1. I believe you are a good person however, I do not believe you have what it takes to take responsibility as a staff member. Please do not feel discouraged but rather see it as a guide.

Thanks,
~ Cyber_Punk_

 

Hornemoans?
I was rofling for about 30 minutes when I read this.

still lmao'ing.
hahahaha

 

-1 Do you even english bro?

*Cough* reasons above
By above I mean what bae said

 

This just proves the point right here. Sorry pizza but I don't see you showing good staff qualities or being ready for the position.
-1

 

Also, you posted this in a suggestion. It makes you look very immature and the grammar/spelling is less than stellar.

Please next time, if this gets denied, don't just wait 2 weeks to reapply and actually try to improve on what people are saying.

-Surv

 

-1 You seem like a nice guy but just not ready yet, try again in a month or so and I'm sure I'd change my mind

 

please don't tell me that you are using bad grammer

 

At no point was he using incorrect grammar... Also the irony within that sentence to strongk 4 me

 

bad grammer you said strongk plz dont tell me im useing bad grammer when you also are.

 

Corrected:
Incorrect grammar? How ironic when you yourself said "strongk" please don't tell me about my grammar issues when your grammar is also lacking.
I would also like to point out it's not a grammatical issue rather a spelling issue...

 

Do NOT come back after being inactive for a day or two, THEN apply. You have to be active for a minimum of a few months before you apply.
*looking up at Bob4444444's post* Stay here. For at LEAST a month. You need to learn server commands, and actually interact with the player base!
Be active on forums! And...grammar. ooohhh yesss. At least be someone correct. Capital letters, a few commas, and periods make a HUGE difference about how people see you!
Proofread your app. Several times. Use some punctuation. Don't put in useless fluff. People don't want to sit through useless fluff. Useless fluff is not what makes an application look good. Also: No useless fluff.
Get on TS too! I have never seen you on TS once!
Tl;dr: Be active and proofread.
Hopefully a rainbow comment will catch your eye. You have to improve on what you need to work on before applying.
Have a nice day! <3

 

-1 Reasons above.

 

I laughed when I saw this.

Thank god you haven't.

You're going through puberty, not your period. May I mention you're barely in 7th grade, where it's not even noticable.

I don't want someone who makes these videos to be staff.
-1

 

criticizing people on your staff app shows lack of maturity and you have terrible English. Just by that I would give a -1.

BTW too you spell grammer and grammar omf...

 

Out of mainly boredom, I decided to put a bit more.
Here's just looking at your recent activity.

Be confident. You are applying because you want staff. If you don't think you are going to get it, you probably won't.

Images inciting death. And gore. Not good. Not mature in the slightest.

You should be able to brush off rudeness like it never happened.

YOU PUT CAPS IN A LOT OF YOUR TITLES! DO YOU SHOUT ALL THE TIME IN REAL LIFE??? THEN YOU DON'T NEED TO SHOUT ALL THE TIME HERE!!!!

When I see you online, you generally are on for 5-10 minutes. All you do is say Hi Meep! Hi 9Insert famour/ranked person here)! I see no helping or real interaction.

There are some more tips. Please listen.

 

i usually help ppl by rarely shout but mainly by msg

--- Double Post Merged, Nov 10, 2014, Original Post Date: Nov 10, 2014 ---

WHY WOULD YOU POST THAT im on a other server not meep plz find one of my meep videos and replace that one

 

It's more than just helping.
Staff do not exist purely to answer questions.
You talk too.